As everyone knows when different kinds of people meet there are several factors that influence each other.
This time, I am going to write a bout immigrant and natives. How important they are in the construction of culture and of course civilization.
When there is a civilization formed by natives there is something very important to consider when immigrant arrive to a place. What I am reffering to is to the fact of diversity.
This important fact is very relevant to the construction of civilization, because natives and immigrants had to live together to build the new civilization.But were they consious about it? did they work together because they wanted to ?
Even if natives had not liked the idea of sharing tarritory (for instance) they did not have options. Natives had to accept to let aside their customs, habit, traditions and so on. This time there were new people living with them. It cannot be ignored by anyone.
I consider that a new civilization and of course a new culture has its advantages and disadvantages. Imigrant helped natives to know different culture and learn from them. However native's culture was influenced by immigrant's one which can be considered negative or positive.
Macarena,
ReplyDeleteYour thesis at the beginning of your post was very clear and your paragraph organization was also good.
The way you presented the topic was easy to follow and understand. I totally agree when you said that not all the time these people were aware of the influence they got from immigrants and also about their consciousness about the formation of a civilization.
Interesting reflections you presented!
I think you conclusion is appealing in the sense that presents your understanding of the duality (and sometimes diversity) in the acquisition of a new culture.
Try to pay attention to some spelling mistakes and also to the words length (150-180).
Nice writing!
Regards,
Oscar Luna.